Dear Camryn
Stop kicking me into the bush I do not like it please stop I might pop if you keep doing it to me can you take me inside to get clean I do not like getting muddy. I do not like getting taken to soccer games and to school. Kids just kick me into the post and they kick me really hard they run with me I do not like it so can you please stop.
Hi its Milla here this is really cool and interesing....
ReplyDeleteKonichiwa Camryn its Aryan just checking out your blog!
ReplyDeleteGood job on the full stops you got heaps.
Next time could you add a little bit more
Anyways blog ya later!
This is awesome Camryn .
ReplyDeletewow this is so amazing and this is courtney i love is apsiloply love it. bye from courtney
ReplyDeleteGOOD JOB!!! ;-)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Camryn.
ReplyDeleteI like this type of writing where the author acts as an object. It makes me think about all the footballs my son has left lying in the backyard and how they are now waterlogged and ruined. I might show him your writing.
Hi Camryn!
ReplyDeleteIt seems like your soccer ball is kind of sad about him getting kicked around into posts and other things! I like how he said why he is sad. I also like how he told you if you could wash him and keep him at home. Maybe next time you should write a little bit more!
Bye!
i love your sikre sory
ReplyDeleteHi Camryn!
ReplyDeleteWow I nearly cried, it's really sad and it's a good reason for him to tell on you.
Next time don't kick the ball in bush.
Is your story fake or real?
blog u later!
Kia ora Camryn.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really descriptive words and complaint in this, it looks like the ball doesn't like getting kicked, I wonder is the ball knows the it is used for kicking. Anyway at the start I didn't know who was talking or writing in the letter but I knew that it was a letter complaint from your soccer ball. This was really good and amazing but I thought that you could put some more writing in. Blog you later bye.
Hey Camryan love your soccer ball I like your story because it means you like soccer I want you to tell me some more of the story hope I see. You at school some time bye TJ out.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Camryn,
ReplyDeleteyou should love soccer don't let anyone get to you keep trying from Rodeshar.
Kia Ora Camryn.
ReplyDeleteWow this story from your soccer ball is really funny. I like that you have used interesting words! Well done!
Na Ella