I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Camryn and this c.i.p we have been making stuff for the All Blacks for the world cup our c.i.p is chairing for them I hope they do well in the world cup this is the poster that me and Cullum done today hope you liked this Bye.
Hi camryn its Bryce. I think its cool how you have so much positivity in this DLO about the ALL Blacks, but becasue their was two people doing this DLO, I think you could have added more information about other things,like about them and why you support them. Whats one thing that you like about the All blacks?
Hi Camryn its Matangi I really like your poster that made about cheering the all blacks on. I like how you have made the poster it looks cool But next time you should put more support into it. great job Camryn keep it up.
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Hi camryn its Bryce.
ReplyDeleteI think its cool how you have so much positivity in this DLO about the ALL Blacks, but becasue their was two people doing this DLO, I think you could have added more information about other things,like about them and why you support them.
Whats one thing that you like about the All blacks?
Hi Camryn its Matangi I really like your poster that made about cheering the all blacks on. I like how you have made the poster it looks cool But next time you should put more support into it. great job Camryn keep it up.
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