The sky is blue and it can be heaps of colours like black purple pink green. The sun is like a fire ball that got lit. The clouds are all different colors the stars in the sky are shining like diamonds shooting through the black sky. The moon is pretty in the morning. The sky can be full of clouds and little bits of blue. In the sky the sun looks like a another planet.
hi kirsty here it sounds like you know the sky
ReplyDeleteHi Nirvana here it sounds like you know the sky vrey will.Have a good time in the sky.
ReplyDeleteHi Camryn, Fenix VT323 here.
ReplyDeleteI Liked the way you changed the font, it looks cool.
Did you think about changing the text colour?
Next time, you could change the highlight colour to blue.
Bye Camryn!
hi Camryn Mikayla K here and it looks like you know the sky pretty well. but maybe next time you could add more commas when you're saying more than one thing. bye bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Camryn.
ReplyDeleteI like the part that you said The sun is a fireball.
Maybe next time you could use a diffrent highlight color even though it is a go color.
Did you think about saying what your fav part about the poem is?