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Thursday, August 25, 2016

caring for others

Caring for Others


Hi my name is Camryn  we have learnt to  do a Caring  for Others  slide             


Hi these are my friends.  If they get  hurt I will help them.   If they get sick I will take them to the sick bay.


8 comments:

  1. Some cool ideas here Camryn! I like that you have used a speech bubble for the person talking! What did you learn from doing this?

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  2. You have many friends that you can care for Camryn. I like that you want to look after them. I like all the speech bubbles. Next time you might like to make your text busier so that it is easier to read.

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  3. Hey Camryn it very good of you and your work is so good you done the best work you can every done keep up the good you have a good day at school good bye.

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  4. Malo e lelei Camryn.
    This really shows people around the world that you can be an awesome friend and people will be like wow he sounds like a nice and kind guy I will go play with him. I wonder how many on comments on this post because this is really nice to watch and read. Kai pi keep up the awesome.

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  5. Hi camryn it is very good i think you do like helping people. and that when they are hurt itś just how would you. but i think you worked on this in reading i hope you would. be happy and help the Juniors.

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  7. Hi cam it's Blake from gilberthorpe school. Your slide is very cool. All of those caring things you seed on your slide is trow you would care for others like that. Next time you can do more slides.
    What was your favorite part about this slide?

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  8. Hi cam it's Blake from gilberthorpe school. Your slide is very cool. All of those caring things you seed on your slide is trow you would care for others like that. Next time you can do more slides.
    What was your favorite part about this slide?

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