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Wednesday, September 25, 2019

trip to Orana park

Hi my name is Camryn and i will be talking you about our trip so we were meant to leave at 8:45 but we left at 9:45 the first thing we seen was the meerkat then we walked a little more we split into 2 groups i was group 1 we went and seen the Tasmanian devils they looked like a pig/dog the lady that we had her name was Ellizabeth she was talking for about 5 mins each animal it was good then we herd the loins raw so we went to the loins.
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2 comments:

  1. Hi Camryn.
    I like how you said what the meerkats looked like but I think you could have added more information about what the instructors said and things like that but everything else was good and the images looked cool.
    What animal was your favourite?

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  2. Hi Camryn Its Kaycee & Lucy here From Gilberthorpe.
    I really like your blog post.
    I loved going to orana park. What did you get to see first?
    Blog you later

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