Once upon a time there was a 8 year old boy and he was in the forest by a lake. He was Cooking same marshmallows. His name is Jake. The Monsters name is Bob. The monster came out of the water and through the woods. Bob went Grrrrrrrrrarrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And Jake went ahhhhh!!!! Jake was scared of the monster he had to use his Stick as a sword. Then he found out that the monster was a bit friendly. Bob he got grumpy because there was no more marshmallows left. So the boy gave the monster his pillow that looked like a marshmallow. The fire was booming. The monster thort that hi cood roast the pillow The boy ran away the boy ran to his tent. Got his pillow that looked like a marshmallow so the boy chucked the pillow the monster grabbed the pillow so the boy ran.The boy ran through the woods where did he go? The monster went to the fire the pillow disappeared.
by Camryn and RoryI am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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