I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hello Camryn Its Bryce. I like how you've put on your DLO but next time I would reccomend to add in a intro to your blog so they know when It was craeted and things like that but I think its cool to be able to see your DLO. Bye
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Hello Camryn Its Bryce.
ReplyDeleteI like how you've put on your DLO but next time I would reccomend to add in a intro to your blog so they know when It was craeted and things like that but I think its cool to be able to see your DLO.
Bye
Hello Camryn, Vin here
ReplyDeleteGood job with the poster but just like Bryce has said you really need an "intro" to show what the poster is for.
Bye!